Feed Back and Planning to Complete

16th JAN - must complete -  by the 14th FEB

• Front cover 
• Contents page 
• double page spread 

14th FEB - must complete -  by the 11th APRIL

• Evaluation 

11th April

evaluation and any updates to your products  

15th May 
final grade sent to examination board

23rd May
AS Exam 

Feedback 
planning= 12/20          Construction= 43/60          overall= 55/80= Proficient

Areas to improve

1. placement - organise the layout of the headlines and the feature story lines that are on the front cover. 
2. visual emphasis - add other images and lay them out in a better format.  
3. writing to accompany screenshots - aim to complete this is one session or at home, write what I have done to editing and the effect it has made towards my final piece. 

How to improve-what to do - 

1. explain print screens
2. add images to props 
3. put other draft on and 
4. put youtube videos on properly 
5. add more planning 
6. plan a draft of 

1st Draft** of Magazine front cover

Photoshop Manipulation

<---Here i have changed the levels of the lighting to make it a lot more  clear so that i can use it and see her more in depth and gives her a <better complexion.--->

<---I started the editing and cropping out the background here
to get her just alone.

I had to zoom and do close up cropping of a different image as the last one had to many shadows and wasn't of a good light so i decision to change the image.--->

<---I have re-shaped the outline of the dress to get rid of creases and improve the look in order to look more naturally correct.






In this I have Cropped more of her
                                                      legs to make it look more even and
                                                      smooth and so that the dress looks
                                                      more even along the bottom. --->

Draft of Front Cover

Photo Shoot - Contents page and DPS

 

These are the shots taken from when we was getting my 'artist' charlotte ready for the front cover shoot - doing her hair and makeup. As the it looked good I decided to take some shots of her getting ready in case I decided to use them for my DPS or contents page, fitting in with the theme of the article on her which is her new transformation.

Photo shoot - Front Cover Shots

photo shoot- location and preparation