Feed Back and Planning to Complete

16th JAN - must complete -  by the 14th FEB

• Front cover 
• Contents page 
• double page spread 

14th FEB - must complete -  by the 11th APRIL

• Evaluation 

11th April

evaluation and any updates to your products  

15th May 
final grade sent to examination board

23rd May
AS Exam 

Feedback 
planning= 12/20          Construction= 43/60          overall= 55/80= Proficient

Areas to improve

1. placement - organise the layout of the headlines and the feature story lines that are on the front cover. 
2. visual emphasis - add other images and lay them out in a better format.  
3. writing to accompany screenshots - aim to complete this is one session or at home, write what I have done to editing and the effect it has made towards my final piece. 

How to improve-what to do - 

1. explain print screens
2. add images to props 
3. put other draft on and 
4. put youtube videos on properly 
5. add more planning 
6. plan a draft of